Ek Rat

[heavenlight]

Hi Everyone

Long time since i've been here, I promised last time I'll post my new poem, but been really busy with education, so here it is. Hope you guys will like it.

EK RAT

Tere pyar mein hum kho jaein
Teri yadein ab mujhe satein
Rat bhar neendh mujhe na aye
Rasta bhoolun mujhe yad teri aye

Tere reshmi bal mere chere se jo takraye
Teri aankho ki chamak mujhe ab bhi bulaye
Tere kashish chere ko dekh ke chand sitare bhi sharmaein
Rung hi rung meri zindagi bhi bhare ayein

[Sweet Munda]

if u wrote that yourself then that is wiikdd big up!:p

[CoolRani]

wowo nice t4s good job keep it up

[Devdasi]

Tere reshmi bal mere chere se jo takraye
Teri aankho ki chamak mujhe ab bhi bulaye
Tere kashish chere ko dekh ke chand sitare bhi sharmaein
Rung hi rung meri zindagi bhi bhare ayein...
yea if u wrote it urself, itz really gud... :cool:

[heavenlight]

Yeah I wrote this poem. Due to education I haven't been able to complete the whole poem but I'm still trying and hopefully I'll finish it.

Thanx for liking it.

[муѕтєяισυѕ_gιяℓ]

woa ! dat is jus wiked
very gud
t4s

[madiha]

good one but i think it should spell like "raat" not rat