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`Enigmatic
Jan 22, 2005, 01:15 AM
ALL POEMS ARE COPYRIGHT, - ¬

Everyday i wake up,
Everytime i open my eyes,
All i see is you,
Every moment of my life and all i can see is those eyes,
Those eyes which are so soulfully filled with pain,
The depths of sorrow are hidden so far beneath
Those eyes which once lead me to bielive tehre was more to life
Are now so easily lying to me
So easily showing me what i never saw
That life itself is hidden with sorrow,
Behind each'z eye'z,which one lives through all there lifeZ.

xTear My Heart Openx
Jan 22, 2005, 02:13 AM
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww sis dat was beautiful!!....wow..i love ur poems! me ur biggest fan here! muahz! love u soo much!

Lia
Jan 22, 2005, 02:09 PM
awwwwi .. nizeeee :wink:

Addictive
Jan 22, 2005, 11:05 PM
Everyday i wake up,
Everytime i open my eyes,
All i see is you,
Every moment of my life and all i can see is those eyes,
Those eyes which are so soulfully filled with pain,
The depths of sorrow are hidden so far beneath
Those eyes which once lead me to bielive tehre was more to life
Are now so easily lying to me
So easily showing me what i never saw
That life itself is hidden with sorrow,
Behind each'z eye'z,which one lives through all there lifeZ.

u wrote it urself?..wow..i like it really..very gud..keep it up :D

i thought always u were a boy..lol..

`Enigmatic
Jan 23, 2005, 02:05 AM
thnks dze lia


Peazhez - hahaha - "pally" i guess - u cood have asked me :wink:
yep i write alot ill post more up soon - and thanks :wink:

`Enigmatic
Jan 23, 2005, 02:08 AM
sorry meant peachez*

`Enigmatic
Jan 23, 2005, 02:14 AM
The people we love the most,
The people we adore the most
Those people who are equivalent to our heartbeats
Are those who we can fight with
They are the ones who are able to crush us
They are the ones who can make u feel so small
Those people are the ones who can make ure heart bleed
All that power is withins one heart
So why bother to call it weak when all that strength,
Can make one weap and
All that is left is a tear between the eye

~*Madz*~
Jan 23, 2005, 03:03 AM
i love writing....but poetry isnt my greatest area lolz

but damn pally

i've gotta say....your poetry is absolutely amazing!! i love the way
you write!! it's reallllllly beautiful! you've got talent sis!

show some more! i wanna seee :P

MD
Jan 23, 2005, 07:08 AM
wow...those were really nice poems...u should like publish a book

`Enigmatic
Jan 23, 2005, 01:11 PM
i love writing....but poetry isnt my greatest area lolz

but damn pally

i've gotta say....your poetry is absolutely amazing!! i love the way
you write!! it's reallllllly beautiful! you've got talent sis!

show some more! i wanna seee :P

Lolz yess u can dance like an angel that why :wink:

awwwwwww sis tahnk youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

`Enigmatic
Jan 23, 2005, 01:12 PM
wow...those were really nice poems...u should like publish a book

thanks manit..u know somebody esle u know said the exact same thing to me lOlz

`Enigmatic
Jan 23, 2005, 01:14 PM
Everyday walking on the sreets,
Seeing all these people,
What we see with these eyes, is all a lie
We do not truly see there emotion,
Were not able to reach there soul,
NOt able to feel waht there feeling,
Coz we are jus people who are alwas in a rush,
But if oly once,
U stop,
Look nto there eyes,
Youl be able to see so much,
It may even overwhelm you,
But your eyes which are like glas mirrors into ure heart,
Are always clear, but await for that one instant
For someone to look into them

+°Deewani Mastani°+
Jan 23, 2005, 01:20 PM
wow :shock:
great poems
keep up the good work

`Enigmatic
Jan 23, 2005, 01:57 PM
Lolz thanks

+°Deewani Mastani°+
Jan 23, 2005, 01:58 PM
np :)

'CooL GuY'
Jan 23, 2005, 03:21 PM
Thanks!!

MD
Jan 23, 2005, 07:50 PM
wow...those were really nice poems...u should like publish a book

thanks manit..u know somebody esle u know said the exact same thing to me lOlz
np....the other poem u added on is really good 2...lol if sum1 else said the same thing then mayb u shud consider it...lol...keep up teh good work :wink:

`Enigmatic
Jan 30, 2005, 10:23 PM
All this time i waited for you
And now that i have u,here with me,
foever in my heart,
it dont matter if yove left me,
coz as long as this soul is with me,
u can never leave me,
After all this time,
I finally have you.

MD
Jan 30, 2005, 10:36 PM
wow very nice poem...good job

`Enigmatic
Jan 31, 2005, 12:14 AM
wow...those were really nice poems...u should like publish a book

thanks manit..u know somebody esle u know said the exact same thing to me lOlz
np....the other poem u added on is really good 2...lol if sum1 else said the same thing then mayb u shud consider it...lol...keep up teh good work :wink:
hey thanks for ure comments really appreciate ittttt
Lolzzzzz yeah maybe in the futuree ill gte book out eh ?
:wink: thanks againnnnnnnnn

`Enigmatic
Jan 31, 2005, 12:19 AM
Lifes a long journey
full of sorrow and happniess
many say this
many belive this
many hide the truth within this
is it so simple ?
is life lived in two different emotions
i would hae belived it at some point
untill i finally walked this journey,calledlife
and whoever said sorrow and happiness is all there is to life
told the biggest lie to himself
he took away what was so special
and he made that speiciality an consant
and never lived life like he should have
Only if someone could have told him
theres much more to life
jus look beyond ure eyes
ull see eveyrthing
look into ure heart
ull feel everything
let ureself think
and ull discover how much more there is to life

xTear My Heart Openx
Feb 01, 2005, 02:30 AM
Pally's got talent :wink:

MD
Feb 01, 2005, 06:56 AM
wow Pally...another beautiful poem =D> keep writin :thumrigh:

`Enigmatic
Feb 22, 2005, 01:19 AM
tahnks guys muahz :wink:

`Enigmatic
Feb 22, 2005, 01:24 AM
This life has given me so much,
Shown me the heights of life,
Let me feel the depths of sorrow,
It let me endure what, once i thought would have destoyed me,
This life,
So much to feel,so much to see,so much for the heart to embrace,
If for some reason when i go
When i have to let go
Will this life let me Fall,
Were will it leave me,
Shattered like glass,
Broken like a vase,
Beaitiful like the stars,
Or bruning like the light of the sunrise

MD
Feb 22, 2005, 05:23 AM
:shock: wow Pally...grl u got talent....i luv this poem so much...good job!...keep writing...lookin 4ward 2 ur next poem

`Enigmatic
Feb 22, 2005, 12:27 PM
thanks manittttttt really appreciaaate it :P

and will defiently have another one up soon :wink:

MD
Feb 22, 2005, 02:27 PM
thanks manittttttt really appreciaaate it :P

and will defiently have another one up soon :wink:
np....ooo good...can't wait 2 read it! :)

-Hope-
Mar 03, 2005, 08:55 AM
pally sis keep writing more...

love it its so niceeeeeeee

`Enigmatic
Mar 15, 2005, 11:53 AM
sitting here im thinking about you
wondering wether or not youl walk through those doors
waiting for that moment
each minute feels like an lifetime
to me a world without you isnt anything at all

`Enigmatic
Mar 15, 2005, 11:55 AM
i wish everyday
for that one thng
each day
every day
all i want
is that same one thing
nothing esle will do
becoz ill i want is you

`Enigmatic
Mar 15, 2005, 11:58 AM
Each and every word you spoke to me
each and every glance u gave to me,
each and every moment of affection u showed,
all this love was unbearable,
and when i look back today,
i realise, that word, look, love,
was all fake,
and the only real thing left at the end of the day,
were those tears u left me.

MD
Mar 15, 2005, 02:31 PM
omg Pally...NICE POEMS....whoa those r all so good...keep up the good work!

`Enigmatic
Mar 16, 2005, 01:26 AM
omg Pally...NICE POEMS....whoa those r all so good...keep up the good work!

ahh thanks manitttttt :P :P

`Enigmatic
Mar 16, 2005, 01:29 AM
This day ends
The night falls
As the stars come out
The moon begins to glow
The sky sparkling
So many stars shining
Yet i can only see two stars shining
So bright, with life
So beautful with love
No wonder, i forgot im gazing into your life, your eyez

MD
Mar 16, 2005, 02:11 AM
omg Pally...NICE POEMS....whoa those r all so good...keep up the good work!

ahh thanks manitttttt :P :P
np pally another beautiful poem

`Enigmatic
Mar 21, 2005, 01:11 AM
^ thanks manit

MD
Mar 21, 2005, 01:22 AM
np :D wuts up?

`Enigmatic
Mar 21, 2005, 03:41 PM
Theres always a person who touches your heart
theres many ppl who make u feel happy
but that one person makes u feel sth u neva felt b4
we ahve many freinds we have many moments with them
but we have one person who we truly love
and each moment with them is neverending
whilst your apart from freinds u miss them
when ure part from that one person
you dnt miss them u feel even more strongly for them
you realise how grateful u are to have them
that life without them would be no life at all
theres one person out there who will,
reach for your hand but touch your heart

`Enigmatic
Mar 21, 2005, 03:42 PM
np :D wuts up?

ahh nothing at the mo im in uni killing time, what u up to sis :P

MD
Mar 22, 2005, 05:13 AM
np :D wuts up?

ahh nothing at the mo im in uni killing time, what u up to sis :P
lol nun much jus doin stupid hw

`Enigmatic
Apr 11, 2005, 02:27 AM
Just thinking about yesterday,
Those single moments i spent with you,
That part of the day were we gazed into each others eyes,
It was nice 4 once not to see any lies,
If only we could always see so clearly through the glass,
Well its nice to always know that we ended on a high note,
Even if at times the record was broken,
Our love was always as strong as that melody,
I just hope i can live each day without missing you,
I hope ill learn to love like i loved you,
Good bye sweet soul, may you always find me in your heart,
May my angel watch over you,
And may our distance let us live our lives the way they should have been.

jatti_4_lyf
Apr 14, 2005, 06:22 AM
omggg ur poemz r sho gud!!!

`Enigmatic
Apr 17, 2005, 03:45 AM
hey thanks

Daym when did this become a sticky :o and why lolz

!*Kriti*!
Apr 17, 2005, 03:49 AM
:shock:

`Enigmatic
Apr 17, 2005, 03:50 AM
^ what happend lolz ?

!*Kriti*!
Apr 17, 2005, 03:55 AM
am juz thinking..where were u when i hadta do my english assigment and write poems...ahhhh
buttt dyum girl..those poems are juzt awesomee!! gud stuf..keep it up!

`Enigmatic
Apr 17, 2005, 03:57 AM
lolll awwwwwwwwww sis u can always msg me at msn whenever u wantttt

And thanks i really appriciate it :P

!*Kriti*!
Apr 17, 2005, 03:58 AM
awww ofcourse...i knoww :)
but yahh am loving ur poems...cant wait to read moree :P

`Enigmatic
Apr 17, 2005, 03:59 AM
:P will post some up soon

!*Kriti*!
Apr 17, 2005, 04:00 AM
okley dokley :P

!*Kriti*!
Apr 17, 2005, 04:01 AM
and oh yah i made ur topic sticky cuz now thats wut u call real poems..not like some oda stuff being copy and pasted from from the web!

`Enigmatic
Apr 17, 2005, 04:04 AM
awwwwww sis wow thankyouu very much, i feel so happy wooT
yeah ano some people say to me did u copy that im like Nooo
Thanks again

!*Kriti*!
Apr 17, 2005, 04:06 AM
awwwwww sis wow thankyouu very much, i feel so happy wooT
yeah ano some people say to me did u copy that im like Nooo
Thanks again

aww lol wohoo...as long as ur happy :P
well it is kinda hard to belive but u got da talent that's y ppl ask
and ur always welcome :P

`Enigmatic
Apr 17, 2005, 04:08 AM
awwwwww sis wow thankyouu very much, i feel so happy wooT
yeah ano some people say to me did u copy that im like Nooo
Thanks again

aww lol wohoo...as long as ur happy :P
well it is kinda hard to belive but u got da talent that's y ppl ask
and ur always welcome :P

Awww so sweeeeeeet
yeah but then again all of them have sth in common, as in ma style if u get me, but i swear their all mine :P

!*Kriti*!
Apr 17, 2005, 04:11 AM
awwwwww sis wow thankyouu very much, i feel so happy wooT
yeah ano some people say to me did u copy that im like Nooo
Thanks again

aww lol wohoo...as long as ur happy :P
well it is kinda hard to belive but u got da talent that's y ppl ask
and ur always welcome :P

Awww so sweeeeeeet
yeah but then again all of them have sth in common, as in ma style if u get me, but i swear their all mine :P

awww u dont have to swear on nething...i belive its all urs... :)

`Enigmatic
Apr 17, 2005, 03:52 PM
Sitting at the window pane,
Watching the outsides' rain,
Each rain drop, like a tear, full of pain,
Whenever i see the rain,
It reminds me of him
When we use to be 2 souls merged as one
This rain, always reminds me of the pain he put me in

!*Kriti*!
Apr 18, 2005, 01:13 AM
awesomee :wink:

`Enigmatic
Apr 18, 2005, 02:11 AM
^ Thankyou :P

`Enigmatic
Apr 18, 2005, 02:16 AM
Their are many people who surround our life,
Each day we come across them,
Everyday they touch our hearts,
The days we miss them the most are when they are gone,
Gone from our sight, gone from our lifes,but not gone from our hearts,
Those peopls's existence which has vanished, hurts us the most,
We remember them with tearful eyes, and broken hearts,
We never miss those who are gone for a day,
Only those who are gone for a lifetime,
They might have gone from the earths surface,
But they live long and strong in our hearts,
Only we have the power to really kill these people,
As long as their alive in our hearts,
No one can take them away from us

xTear My Heart Openx
Apr 18, 2005, 02:28 AM
Their are many people who surround our life,
Each day we come across them,
Everyday they touch our hearts,
The days we miss them the most are when they are gone,
Gone from our sight, gone from our lifes,but not gone from our hearts,
Those peopls's existence which has vanished, hurts us the most,
We remember them with tearful eyes, and broken hearts,
We never miss those who are gone for a day,
Only those who are gone for a lifetime,
They might have gone from the earths surface,
But they live long and strong in our hearts,
Only we have the power to really kill these people,
As long as their alive in our hearts,
No one can take them away from us

wow.........i have always told u.....u write such great poem..wow...woww...love it..

`Enigmatic
Apr 18, 2005, 02:47 AM
Their are many people who surround our life,
Each day we come across them,
Everyday they touch our hearts,
The days we miss them the most are when they are gone,
Gone from our sight, gone from our lifes,but not gone from our hearts,
Those peopls's existence which has vanished, hurts us the most,
We remember them with tearful eyes, and broken hearts,
We never miss those who are gone for a day,
Only those who are gone for a lifetime,
They might have gone from the earths surface,
But they live long and strong in our hearts,
Only we have the power to really kill these people,
As long as their alive in our hearts,
No one can take them away from us

wow.........i have always told u.....u write such great poem..wow...woww...love it..

awwwwwww sis, thanks you

Angelgirl
Apr 20, 2005, 11:25 AM
u write great poems. [-o< [-o< [-o<

`Enigmatic
Apr 21, 2005, 10:22 AM
^Thanks

`Enigmatic
Apr 24, 2005, 01:38 PM
Each night, when I lie awake, till 3 in the morning
All I think about is you, every moment I live is for you
These birds which sing in the morn, sing for you
My heart that aches, aches for you,
This pain which I put myself through,
I do only for you
I wouldn’t have loved someone as much I love you
I only love you coz baby you’re so beautiful

MD
Apr 24, 2005, 08:56 PM
u shud write a book of poems

`Enigmatic
Apr 29, 2005, 01:57 AM
The look in you eyez makes me crazy
The touch of your skin makes be wearey
The thought of your sight makes me sleepless at night
All things connected with you, seem to be right
Even the bad conncted with you goes out of sight
The look in your eyez makes me crazy
Shall i close these eyez ??

MD
Apr 29, 2005, 01:57 AM
lol nice poem did u jus write it?

!*Kriti*!
Apr 29, 2005, 03:22 AM
Each night, when I lie awake, till 3 in the morning
All I think about is you, every moment I live is for you
These birds which sing in the morn, sing for you
My heart that aches, aches for you,
This pain which I put myself through,
I do only for you
I wouldn’t have loved someone as much I love you
I only love you coz baby you’re so beautiful

omggggggggggggi luv thisss oneeeeeeeeeee

`Enigmatic
Apr 29, 2005, 12:44 PM
lol nice poem did u jus write it?

lol, hey, thanks, nah had it from b4 :P

`Enigmatic
Apr 29, 2005, 12:44 PM
Each night, when I lie awake, till 3 in the morning
All I think about is you, every moment I live is for you
These birds which sing in the morn, sing for you
My heart that aches, aches for you,
This pain which I put myself through,
I do only for you
I wouldn’t have loved someone as much I love you
I only love you coz baby you’re so beautiful

omggggggggggggi luv thisss oneeeeeeeeeee

awwww kool

`Enigmatic
Apr 29, 2005, 01:03 PM
This Summer so Beautiful, The surroundings so peacfull, everything and everyone seems so prefect,
This summer which brings happiness into those dark places
That ray of light which changes your pain into delight,Eveyrthing in summer always seems so right,

MD
Apr 29, 2005, 02:16 PM
lol nice poem did u jus write it?

lol, hey, thanks, nah had it from b4 :P
np o ok

`Enigmatic
May 01, 2005, 12:53 AM
Loves True Colours

The true colours of love,
The bright ones,
Those dark ones
The beautuful ones,
The sorrowful onez,
All these colours,
Yet the true clours of love never seem to be clear,
Always a blurr,
Maybe thats coz ,
The true colour of love cant bee seen,
Only felt.

***Angelic Diva***
May 01, 2005, 01:02 AM
Each night, when I lie awake, till 3 in the morning
All I think about is you, every moment I live is for you
These birds which sing in the morn, sing for you
My heart that aches, aches for you,
This pain which I put myself through,
I do only for you
I wouldn’t have loved someone as much I love you
I only love you coz baby you’re so beautiful

:shock: wowww niceeeee....another talent to add to the existing long list :)

`Enigmatic
May 02, 2005, 02:15 AM
^ lolz thanks

-§alina-
May 02, 2005, 04:26 AM
Hey Pally
I read some of your poems and they're Mind-blowing. :wink:
Great job sweety, Keep writing!

`Enigmatic
May 02, 2005, 04:29 PM
Hey salina, thanks so much :P

`Enigmatic
May 02, 2005, 04:37 PM
Ive come to the point were its getting to much for me
This burden is wieghing me down so much,
I feel as though ill be crushed into the ground
Eveyrthing that i thought i had found
Seems to be 6 feet deep into the ground
Will i be able to dig up whats under all this soil
Each time i try to reach for it, it crumbles
This soil in which everyting is burried seems to represent my life
Everytime i think i have something it crumbles,
Each time im happy, water comes my way and washes it all away
I wonder if it will change, its becoming unbearable at the moment

`Enigmatic
May 03, 2005, 02:25 AM
The smaller things in life should be said,
We think they are felt but sometimes they are left unsaid
We always talk about the good
We dwell on the bad
And live in the midst of these 2
We nevr learn 2 deal with both at one time
But only have the courage to face one
Maybe one day well seee through them both and
Say what should be said

*Encouraged by a convo with amisha*

-§alina-
May 03, 2005, 02:58 AM
^ I love that one.

Your most welcome hun. Have you ever considered of becoming a poet?

`Enigmatic
May 03, 2005, 11:49 AM
aww kool, glad you did :P

No not really, my kind of main priority is uni but its a hobby

***Angelic Diva***
May 03, 2005, 06:38 PM
The smaller things in life should be said,
We think they are felt but sometimes they are left unsaid
We always talk about the good
We dwell on the bad
And live in the midst of these 2
We nevr learn 2 deal with both at one time
But only have the courage to face one
Maybe one day well seee through them both and
Say what should be said

*Encouraged by a convo with amisha*

awwww im ur inspiration :P *blushing*
btw gr8 stuff pally...keep writing
loving it :D

-§alina-
May 04, 2005, 12:21 AM
Oh well, If you were to pursue into a writing career, You'd do incredibly well :wink:[/u]

ÛñÐêrÇøVêr•ÅñG꣙
May 04, 2005, 02:38 AM
Loves True Colours

The true colours of love,
The bright ones,
Those dark ones
The beautuful ones,
The sorrowful onez,
All these colours,
Yet the true clours of love never seem to be clear,
Always a blurr,
Maybe thats coz ,
The true colour of love cant bee seen,
Only felt.

luv dis one :P

Юãmäqµêêñ
May 16, 2005, 04:10 AM
Loves True Colours

The true colours of love,
The bright ones,
Those dark ones
The beautuful ones,
The sorrowful onez,
All these colours,
Yet the true clours of love never seem to be clear,
Always a blurr,
Maybe thats coz ,
The true colour of love cant bee seen,
Only felt.

luv dis one :P

ITA!!!

Юãmäqµêêñ
May 16, 2005, 04:10 AM
Loves True Colours

The true colours of love,
The bright ones,
Those dark ones
The beautuful ones,
The sorrowful onez,
All these colours,
Yet the true clours of love never seem to be clear,
Always a blurr,
Maybe thats coz ,
The true colour of love cant bee seen,
Only felt.

luv dis one :P

ITA!!!

-Hope-
Jun 11, 2005, 08:51 AM
very nice pally shish@ :wink:

put more love them all@ :D

.HERO.
Jun 22, 2005, 08:13 AM
:custom8: :cheers:

`Enigmatic
Jun 26, 2005, 02:15 AM
This life im living
living with such trouble
With such pain
Will this life ever change
will it ever become easier ?
each day something new is wrong
how hard will i have to try to make it right
im sick of making it right
i just want it to end
id rather not be if being is so painfull
painfull is being hurt is being miserbale
i want to feel nothing
becase if nothing is feeeling no pain
i want to be nothing

`Enigmatic
Jun 26, 2005, 02:16 AM
Sometimes we feel as if everything is wrong
The menaing of right vanishes
And takes all the good things with it
The people seem wrong, the atmosphere feels wrong,
Not one thing seems right all that you see is broken,
Maybe tis life we feel reflects the condiotion of this heart...Broken..Wrong..
What we feel in our hearts relfects upon our life
Ill wait for that moment untill it turns right and gets ammended..


To be real is to feel,
to be real is to feel pain,
To be real is to feel love,
To be real is to feel those tears,
To be real means to endure that which is so wrong yet so right in every other way

`Enigmatic
Jun 26, 2005, 02:16 AM
Whilst i sit here and absorb myself in my thoughts,
All i can see is the darkness,
It matches what i see outside,
The dark, outside that unknown of what is there,
Very similar to my thouhts wich are often dark,
And need some to shine light onto them,
Perhaps when the sunrises so will the light in my thoughtd,
Though for now all i see is the darkness in were my steps are also unclear,
Wht will come next ican not anticipate,
But perhaps il find sth im looking for
Or maybe ill regret what i come across,
Who knows lets go and see...

`Enigmatic
Jun 26, 2005, 02:25 AM
Whenever i think of you i think of all that love
That love which grew so strong
It became its own
Holding us together through all that was wrong
Not sperating us for so long
I became so blinded in a love so strong
That i forgot about all that was wrong
The pain was nothing compared to the connection we made
That pain grew and that connection weakend
I never thought that love would begin to fade
Just like our names which were engraved in the sand
Washed over by the waves
Cleared away by the water
And had sailed away so far that no love so strong coold ever bring back....

!*Kriti*!
Jun 26, 2005, 03:31 AM
danggg
gud stuff pallyyy

MD
Jun 26, 2005, 06:36 AM
pallllyyyy ur so talented
keep up da good work

`Enigmatic
Jun 27, 2005, 12:59 AM
Your something new
Jus like a breath of fresh air
Everythig about you seems so real
Their arent any lies jus laffs to keep it real
Never thought id find a freind in you
Just some chats u know one or two
Who knew id take shine to you

.HERO.
Jun 27, 2005, 09:22 AM
Whenever i think of you i think of all that love
That love which grew so strong
It became its own
Holding us together through all that was wrong
Not sperating us for so long
I became so blinded in a love so strong
That i forgot about all that was wrong
The pain was nothing compared to the connection we made
That pain grew and that connection weakend
I never thought that love would begin to fade
Just like our names which were engraved in the sand
Washed over by the waves
Cleared away by the water
And had sailed away so far that no love so strong coold ever bring back....

I Like This One! :wink:

•Amrita•
Jun 30, 2005, 02:19 PM
You're very good ji, keep it up! :)

`Enigmatic
Jul 01, 2005, 03:02 AM
Thanks Jii - much apprecaited that use took the time to read it :P

`Enigmatic
Jul 01, 2005, 03:03 AM
In the present we regret the past and we hope for the future
Yet we tend to turn that future into a past which we end up regretting
If we bring the past forward when will the future seem bright
Becoz with this reoccuring past all their is, is darkness
To chnage the ways we live, is to change the future and the present we are in
It will shape that future away from the past we regret
And if we keep on shaping it that darkness will disappear
And for our future we will be able to see clearly with that light shining so clear

¬Pally